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Taking my first wobbly steps,
holding onto the maze of ropes.
Speaking my first unsure words,
"Papa! Papa! Papa!"

Learning to ride my tricycle,
up again even with scraped knees.
The first day of school,
so afraid of meeting new people.

Playing hockey in the streets,
who cared if the people got angry?!
Climbing the highest trees,
just to see a clear view of the sky.

Walking to school halls,
thinking we were the coolest.
Late nights and long summers.
Making new friends only to lose them again.

Dating the older guys,
because they're oh so mature. Ha.
Growing up with broken hearts,
broken promises and losing sleep.

Breaking into the "rebel" scene,
drinking the nights away.
Holding a constant cigarette,
"unique" tattoos and piercings.

Leaving old friends and memories,
running away from this quaint suburban town.
Making my way in the city of angels,
looking for the perfect adventure.

Finally settling down and falling in love,
marriage, kids, and a new house.
Continuing the same plans,
until we're left alone.

Days turn into weeks,
which turn into months,
and on into years.
Always the same.

These wrinkles show the passing time,
our hands always entwined.
We've lived a long life.
and now it's time to go.

Death is knocking on the door,
and I see Grim's face.
We walk into the light
and everything fades away.

This is growing up.

And this.  is.  the end.
©2005-2010 ~1-LoSt-3
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Author's Comments

I came up with it in Joy of Cooking class. I'm not sure if I exactly like it yet though. I do like the "rebel" scene stanza and the last 2 lines but I may move this into scraps later. *shrugs* And I wasn't sure where it belonged so I put it in general poetry, maybe it's human nature, I'm not sure.

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:icony0ungbl0od:
Whoa.. Very very nicely done. Tittle goes very well with it. I love it. like always <333 Great job :hug:

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=-= "Never frown cause you never know who might be falling in love with your smile" =-=

* YB *
:iconowenmuse:
sounds perfect! can i join you? Lol, 831 me lovely Lynx.

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"Here we are, born to be Kings, we're the princes of the universe.
Here we belong, fighting to survive in a world with the darkest power."

-Princes of The Universe by Queen
:icon1-lost-3:
hehe maybe...and thanks for the fav! :heart:

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Love is a dangerous angel.
:icon1-lost-3:
hehe thank you love!!! xoxoxo ^_^

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Love is a dangerous angel.
:iconowenmuse:
heh, as if i cud resist. 831!

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"Here we are, born to be Kings, we're the princes of the universe.
Here we belong, fighting to survive in a world with the darkest power."

-Princes of The Universe by Queen
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i like it. i think each line flows into the next. and my favorite stanza is probably:
"Leaving old friends and memories,
running away from this quaint suburban town.
Making my way in the city of angels,
looking for the perfect adventure"

i think the first wto lines make sad, but the second two make me happy and excited to go out into the real world. :D

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i'm a goddess down on my knees
:icon1-lost-3:
hehe thank you muches, that's one of my favorite stanzas too. ^_^

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Love is a dangerous angel.
:iconsum1publicsecret:
of course sweetes *)

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i'm a goddess down on my knees
:iconornami:
Nice Job, i like it!!^^

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Like Play-doh, no matter what shapes you mold me into, no matter how impressively magnificent, I usually end up crushed....

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