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Sleeping Beauty by ~1-LoSt-3:icon1-LoSt-3:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


Stapling these worn-out dreams
upon my walls, only to tear them down again.
A girl with a perfect smile,
a boy with sad eyes.
Dreams I've had of yesterday,
that never seem to fade away.

Stapling my frayed heart
back together again, half-empty.
One lost love, two broken hearts.
One boy, one girl.
Two hearts: their world.
Empty now but with distant love-songs.

Stapling my eyelids
to shut out the cold world around me.
Where hearts are things to play with
and emotions are things to toy with.
Wake me up in a century;
for now I'll pretend to be Sleeping Beauty.

So don't wake me up.
Please don't wake me up.
I'd like to sleep for a century.
©2005-2010 ~1-LoSt-3
:icon1-lost-3:

Author's Comments

I was sitting in food class when the first 2 lines popped into my head and as I began to write them down the rest of it just came along out of nowhere. So here it is.

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~mentalwanderer May 4, 2005, 11:36:39 AM
wow. depressingly pretty :) i like the concept

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«magpierific.»
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~turkystuffing May 4, 2005, 11:37:14 AM
wow. nice. really nice. deep and full of meaning.
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~theKillerinside May 4, 2005, 12:39:46 PM
::pokes your sleeping body::hey hey hey watcha doin hey you hey hey!dammit wake up i lovies you!

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Kiss Kiss, Sugar Your Dead
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~sum1publicsecret May 4, 2005, 2:46:32 PM
wow!!! i really liked that one. i wanna go and give the girl a hug, then give the guy a hug, and give her reasons to be awake. it really is good though, it paints a great picture, well, a beautiful one anyway. *muah!*! :D

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get me some water


can't you see i'm burnin' alive?
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~vegeta690 May 4, 2005, 8:32:45 PM
one boy, one girl....two hearts their world...time goes by secrets rise... one more sad song tears shed shes gone...she'd take it back if she only could....and all the perfect words they seem so wrong...
listening to the all american rejects lately? hehe

magnificent, the stapling of the various miscellanious objects at the beginning of each stanza gives it a nice touch, this is by far one of your best sweetheart :heart: :smooch:

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A Dream of You, In A World Without You.
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~OwenMuse May 4, 2005, 10:16:22 PM
this is definitely one of my fav's. loved it when you first read it to me, still love it now. some of the lines kinda seem like...y'know, us. 831! :hug: :blowkiss:

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"Here we are, born to be Kings, we're the princes of the universe.
Here we belong, fighting to survive in a world with the darkest power."

-Princes of The Universe by Queen
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~1-LoSt-3 May 5, 2005, 4:30:18 AM
hehe thanks hun and thanks for the fav...:hug:

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Love is a dangerous angel.
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~1-LoSt-3 May 5, 2005, 4:31:11 AM
Yes, oh how I love them. ^_^ Thanks dearie. :glomp:

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Love is a dangerous angel.
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~1-LoSt-3 May 5, 2005, 4:31:56 AM
lol thank you doll. I think it's a good one. :hug:

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Love is a dangerous angel.
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