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Raven hair and hazel eyes,
the eyes that show it all.
Show that inside she's breaking,
losing her will of everything.
All she wants will never be.

She's fading away, doing a disappearing act,
but nothings different, it hasn't changed.
They still don't see, don't hear
her sad eyes and lowered voice.
The scars on her body that tell the story.

She walks the halls like a zombie,
sitting in class in a trance.
And no one says a word. Not even
the ones who are supposed to know.
She just wants to be saved,
by anyone, by him.

The only one who notices her pain,
the way she just hasn't been sane.
She'd cry herself to sleep like usual
but lately the tears just haven't come.
All she wants is that happy life.

She wants to hear she's beautiful
and know they mean it, not just for her looks.
She wants to see that glint of happiness
in her eyes as well as theirs.
She wants to feel those butterflies
and have what the movies portray.

She needs someone to see her,
and prays for the days when boys
don't mean she's protected and okay.

She just...wants. Needs.
©2005-2010 ~1-LoSt-3
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Author's Comments

I was listening to the song I Want To Save You by Something Corporate when this just hit me from it's inspiration. It's a quick one and not exactly fixed up but here it is anyway. Treat it nicely.

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:icony0ungbl0od:
Wow. Thats great. Sad but awesome. <33

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=-= "Never frown cause you never know who might be falling in love with your smile" =-=

* YB *
:icon1-lost-3:
Thanks sunshine. *hug-ness*

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Love is a dangerous angel.
:iconowenmuse:
fantastic poem...just wish you knew how much you ARE seen and heard and felt and everything else that matters in this trivial world...831...

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"Here we are, born to be Kings, we're the princes of the universe.
Here we belong, fighting to survive in a world with the darkest power."

-Princes of The Universe by Queen
:icon1-lost-3:
Thanks but who ever said it was about me?! O.o o.O

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Love is a dangerous angel.
:iconsum1publicsecret:
i hear the something corporate in it, and your writing makes it fit in there very poetically. ((<<i think i spelled that wrong :P)) the people you create or emphasize in your poetry seem to yearn a second glance. they almost become real in my head. that takes talent. to create a story with a person walking through it.

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always a friend never a fuck .
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Yeah, I've been listening to their stuff a lot lately and I'm finding it to be amazing how simliar their songs are to how I'm feeling these days. Like to a t. It's incredible and they're a good band. I think I might have even used a few of the lines in that poem. And it makes me really oober happy to know that I can almost create the character in your head because that's always what I'm going for. So massive points to you for giving me good feedback. :heart: :heart: :heart:

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Love is a dangerous angel.
:iconsum1publicsecret:
lol; massive-errr points to you for deserving the feedback!
lol


why does this sound like it could go on for a verrry long time?

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always a friend never a fuck .
:icon1-lost-3:
Probably because it could, but we're ending it here, lol. ^_^

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Love is a dangerous angel.
:iconowenmuse:
it was more-or-less a "just incase" kinda thing. still love ya!

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"Here we are, born to be Kings, we're the princes of the universe.
Here we belong, fighting to survive in a world with the darkest power."

-Princes of The Universe by Queen

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